Dear Jasmin,

           I enjoyed reading the writing pieces you included from your senior year. The literary analysis essay of A Thousand Splendid Suns  because I like that you focused on the concepts of pain and endurance. I feel that many individuals do not have the mental strength to endure spousal abuse like Mariam and Laila. On the other hand, I felt you could've weaved theme throughout your reflection instead of just the introduction. Overall, the pieces of work were presented nicely and creatively on your website.

                                  Sincerely,

                                          Angela

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